Building on 2nd Idea

This is the way I can see our second idea turning out, though I feel as a group we tend to come up with lots of ideas that may conflict with one another. Therefore I have decided to write down what I am thinking of as an idea at the moment and we will then be able to see which ideas are taken forward:

Opening Scene
Sound of female screaming over black screen. We then go to a close up of Rory's face. He is sweating and breathing heavily. The room is dark.

Second Scene
We see Rory leaving his squat and starting to walk down the street. We then go to a side view of him (through a car window?). We then see from another angle Rory walking along at the same speed as the camera and in the background we see 2/3 men who spot Rory. He then sees them and starts to run away, so beginning a chase. Some music will start here which will indicate times of action/tension.

Third Scene
The titles for the film then start over the sound of footsteps, someone out of breath running and the music we have selected. These titles will mention only production names and not yet the title.

Fourth Scene
He is still running and we may leave 5 seconds in this before he starts to see flashbacks. He will have three flashbacks, the first of a girl getting chucked in a car boot, the second of her tied to a chair and the third of her head being dunked in water.

Fifth Scene
He then gets to somewhere he feels he is safe and texts his girlfriend telling her to "GET OUTTA THERE NOW!", he then spots the gang and starts running again.

Sixth Scene
This is the longest part of the chase we have seen so far. It may involve jumps, running round corners and/or chucking obstacles down in the way. The whole piece then ends with him looking behind him seeing nobody there and then turning forwards and getting hit with a bat going to the blackness of the bat touching the camera lense (we may film this part by doing it slowly and then speeding it up).

We then go to the title of the film. I thought "Withholding Information" would be a good title.